the government should taxing unhealthy food because this can discourage people to reduce their consuming and to used this taxes for something beneficial, agree or disagree.
Maintaining our health is one of the most effective ways of guaranteeing that we live long and prosperous life. I do many things in order to stay fit, but the most important one is maintaining a healthy diet. There are two reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, eating healthy food prevent the obesity, which is cause of many of very serious illness. Obesity is debilitate all by itself, but it also lead to variety of other diseases, including diabetes, heart problems , arthritis and cancer. If we do not aware of this connection when we make decision about the food which we eat, we will suffer serious consequences, My eldest cousin is a compelling example of this. He was mostly eating junk food with high sugar in it, like cookies or cake, high sugar juices. He did not only gained weight, but also suffered from the diabetes and high blood pressure. Thanks for the new taxing on the fast food and high sugar products, that force him to reduce his consuming for these kinds of food. After one year, he lost about 30 bounds of his weight. Moreover, his doctor decided to decrease of his medication for high blood pressure. all that because he decrease the fast food and became depend on healthy diet.
Furthermore, taxing people who consuming unhealthy food, would not discourage them to quiet the fast food only but it would help the government to used this taxes revenue to built something beneficial for the society. For example, The governments can use this revenues to encourage farmers to planted the organic corps. like fruits and vegetables. Recently, These organic products become expensive, because the high demand of the market for fruits and vegetables in high quantities, and because the limitation of the organic farms. So if the government support this project everyone would get benefit. As a result, not only our health would improved but also the medication consuming would reduce, this medication cost the government every year millions of dollars. If people keep up their health that would cut the expenses of medications that the government put it yearly and use that money to improve the education or other activities.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the government should taxing people who are consuming unhealthy food. I feel this way because adding taxing could discourage people to reduce junk food consuming, and because this taxes revenue could help the government to support the organic farms
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95942720764 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56243024351 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517899761337 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.676822095 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9523809524 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400200889651 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105953335201 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125318641901 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251469760557 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176567873964 0.0645574589148 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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