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being honest

Benjamin Franklin once said a famous proverb that goes “Honesty is the Best Policy”. The significance of this one proverbial phrase has been imposed upon us from right at the beginning. Back when we were kids, all our parents and teacher taught us how to be honest and truthful under all circumstances. Back then, we might have found their preaching too wise to take into account, but the necessity and consequences of being honest to have been realized over time. Over time, as we have grown up, life has taught us how immensely valuable the quality of honesty is, through various situations and dilemmas.
First of all, honesty is major component for developing moral character inside a child; it helps in developing good attributes like kindness, discipline, truthfulness, moral integrity and more. Children with such a quality they can lead the world and make a big success in their life. A good example for that is Benjamin Franklin story. He was the greatest president that governs the United States ever. This leader was well- known by his honesty which that helped him to be sounded by loyal people, all worked to lead America to lead the new world, this quality helped him to be successful and confident public speaker. When people teach their children to be honest, they start writing the first chapter in the book of wisdom for them to pursuit their lives.
Another notable benefit of teaching children being honest, that honesty strengthens and improves relationships between people. It certainly helps in bringing people together. Most noteworthy, it fosters a connection between individuals. Let’s take my own experience with my friend Sara for example. Sara was my classmate at school, she was always speaking truth. As a result, everyone in class trust her and seen her as a sign of bravery included me. For this, she was very popular at school, every one of us liked to be her friend. In this regard, honesty is always admirable in family, civil society, friends and cross the globe. Person with honesty is respected by all.
In conclusion, parents should realize the value of being honest in order to convey this merit to their children. Honesty is an essential requirement in modern lime. It is one of the best habits which encourages an individual and make capable enough to solve a d handle any difficulty situation in his/ her life. honesty lead more successful life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Honesty
... difficulty situation in his/ her life. honesty lead more successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94306930693 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6045567871 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3739372499 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2083333333 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243401321472 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620075176092 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102827898078 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156737399119 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211359802904 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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