The government wants to improve education levels. Which of the following do you think is the best way?
Thanks to as a student had experienced education system that absolutely and clearly knew that what kind of education measures are good for students to get a well learn supplement from government policies t to improve. Thus, among of these policies, hiring more teachers to teach in a small class, preschool education before kindergarten, to provide some training courses to teachers, from a personal viewpoint, it is definitely and obviously to take the first one, which is much better than other two.
To begin with, hiring more teachers effectively benefit to improve the education qualities of teachers with more time to prepare. As we know clearly that whether the students acquire a great quality education, as an important factor that it is almost dependent on the major quality content of preparing lessons through teachers. For instance, if the teachers take lessons in a big class, meaning that teachers are hardly to have enough time to considerate to make clear specific teaching methods for everyone different trait of students, instead of to manage the class disciplines, let alone for having extra tutorship, and teachers leave classroom when the bell rings with discipline management of exhausted energies as long as. In contrast, if teachers take in a small class that the teachers have sufficient time to prepare teaching methods, and having specific teaching methods with dissenting various characters of students, and teachers much easily control the class disciplines in the small class. Even more, students still ask questions from teachers after class, and teachers can help students to finger out that whatever questions do not understand from the classes, of which means that teachers need more time to distribute for students with extra tutorship. Thus, it is obvious that hiring more teachers to teach in a small class to teachers can acquire better quality of teaching, which is the best way among of theses teaching methods.
Additionally, hiring more teachers to teach in a small class that can beneficially promote communication between the teachers and students. Taking my experiences for an example, thanks to the English class is small, it is easily to have more opportunities to ask whatever I want to ask with raise hands in the limited class time as long as, which means that we have many chances to communicate to dissenting various questions, and scenes do not happen that let’s alone for my extracurricular time to figure out. Even more, the questions can be timely solved in the class that it is surly and easily to do homework and review, and I get a lot of time for sports. Thus, if I have a chance to choose hiring more teachers to teach in a small class that would definitely pick the small one.
Finally, hiring more teachers to teach in a small class for teachers teaching students of that teachers have sufficient time to relax, so as to teachers can have more energies to distribute for students. As we know that teachers always be busy with stuffs of students or another matters of school. As homework correcting, preparing lessons, work plan or meetings and so on, all of which take a lot of time for teachers to deal with them. Even worse, teachers have to finish all of the matters each everyday in the midnight. Obviously, teachers do not have enough time get a well rest, let’s alone for teachers taking some entertainment activities or taking training classes of that recover the exhausted energies to cast to students in next day. If always like these negative effects, why not do to pick hiring more teachers to teach in a small class?
For those reasons, we can surely conclude that hiring more teachers to teach in a small class is the best way among these advices by promotions of government, which is much more important to students to acquire highly quality education system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to supplement'
Suggestion: to supplement
...e good for students to get a well learn supplement from government policies t to improve. ...
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Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to hire'.
Suggestion: to hire
...rts. Thus, if I have a chance to choose hiring more teachers to teach in a small class...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...teachers have sufficient time to relax, so as to teachers can have more energies to dist...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 475, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...em. Even worse, teachers have to finish all of the matters each everyday in the midnight. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... have to finish all of the matters each everyday in the midnight. Obviously, teachers do...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, well, as to, for instance, in contrast, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3210.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 644.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98447204969 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0375743251 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68679491995 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.399068322981 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1187936701 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.947368421 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8947368421 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0768033153516 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035081725681 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367692771813 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683044821359 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338703400526 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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