Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
Even though there is a popular agreement that expanding more money in support of artwork is a better choice for many peoples, I have a different opinion. I agree that spending more money on sports and athletics facilities are best for me. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will examine in this essay.
First and foremost, funding sports facilities with more money helps students to improve their health as well as decrease the mortality rate, Additionally, students will get their best result in academics life. Along with this, improving sports opportunities by spending more money on them encouraging them to exercise so they can maintain their body posture. Furthermore, involvement in some athletic practice aids them to boost their immune system. Therefore the government should make it easier for people to adopt an active and healthy lifestyle. For instance, I remember when I was a child I used to work out a lot like jumping, running, and aerobic exercise so it strengthens my muscles and bones.
As a result, investing a greater amount of money in sports definitely has a positive impact on their daily life.
Secondly, sports and games play a very important role in our social life. The Government should provide funds so that schools can arrange a free sports games. Moreover, students build their bond with the other students also they can participate in their daily life activities and take more knowledgeable skills from them. Although, many people come from different backgrounds so they will enhance their communication skills. For example, I belong from a very small town in Hyderabad there was a Gymkhana club over there me and my brother used to play badminton every day. Eventually, by playing badminton we met a lot of new people and made new friends we created Beautiful memories together. Therefore, supporting sports games with more money obviously directly related to improving our interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, all the factors I mentioned we can reach in the result that everyone have a right to enjoy their life by different perspective ways so supporting sports with a larger amount of money has a countless number of benefits.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...aids them to boost their immune system. Therefore the government should make it easier fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir communication skills. For example, I belong from a very small town in Hyderab...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Beautiful memories together. Therefore, supporting sports games with more money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07242339833 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77955071708 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562674094708 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2510872759 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153227649872 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553308427237 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570426920734 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924066828708 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436911736212 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...aids them to boost their immune system. Therefore the government should make it easier fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir communication skills. For example, I belong from a very small town in Hyderab...
^^
Line 6, column 705, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Beautiful memories together. Therefore, supporting sports games with more money ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07242339833 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77955071708 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562674094708 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2510872759 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153227649872 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553308427237 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570426920734 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924066828708 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436911736212 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.