High salary job or job with lots of holidays
Salary is one of the important factors to choose a job. Many people opt for a highly paid job rather than the ones with lots of holidays. Even though some would think it is right to select jobs with high salary, I think it is better to go for jobs that give plenty of holidays. I will elaborate my reasons for holding this opinion in the following.
To begin with, choosing a job with ample holidays can benefit one's health. workers with stressful jobs and work in special condition have to cope with health problems everyday. Nowadays, people are so busy that they can not take care of their well-being properly due to their work schedule. if people were given sufficient holidays, they would pay attention to their general well-being and mental state. my sister is a perfect instance of this. When she was working with little to no day-offs, she became seriously ill and was diagnosed with heart disease and depression. I believe it could have been prevented if she was resting enough and not concentrating on her work too much.
Second, holidays correlates with an employee's work quality directly. our body is not a machine, it needs to take a break time to time to work more efficiently. There was a one experiment that employees worked for 4 days and rested for 3 days instead of the usual pattern, and their work efficiency increased dramatically. this experiment shows how little changes in our routine that seem insignificant can affect people's performance.
In conclusion, working for a job that has a lot of holidays will not only helps you to stay healthy, also it can increase your work performance. I hope many workplaces would provide adequate holidays for their workers in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, well, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81292517007 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64814868751 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7938863789 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2352941176 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325253927063 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109301627884 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124858866679 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202284241806 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128157936107 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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