how do movies or television affect people
Rarely has a technological invention had as great an impact on human’s perception and behavior in many aspects as the growth of movies and television. Television is the most persuasive mean to communicate people and has already become part of our life. people are so used to television that it is hard to imagine what life would be like without it. It obviously influences people behavior for some special reasons. The argument of this view goes as follow.
First, television play a key role in shaping today’s people life style, as new mean of entertainment. Without going out a person ca keep contact wit the most important news and latest issue in home. Various kind of information ranging from news to movies, from teaching program to documentary, could be transfer by television. Moreover TV is a good tool to spread out information and knowledge. A child could learn culture languages and customs of other countries. The agent of information could range from a revered actor to an architect, from people debating politics in the news to farmer living in a village. Television obviously changes the tradition way the knowledge reaches normal people by providing a new method to transmit information to every family through broadcasting.
Second, television helps us to understand social and political issues. News programs provide discussion about the most important issues. The expert and the government officials always appear in these programs and give us a better understanding of current issues, such as what the newest architects are experimenting with, or political problems of our community. with the invention and growth of television, complicated social and political problem could be easily understood by the average people.
Television, nevertheless, has some disadvantages in shaping of our social life and our community. For example, outdoor activities decreased with the invention of television. More and more people are indulging into various television programs with few communications with their families.
In a word, mass media such as television, by providing various information and discussions in depth, shapes our perception and knowledge of the world. despite of few disadvantages, it is a powerful tool to communicate and reach other human beings, rather than just a sources of entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43989071038 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12344798571 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2935453129 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8095238095 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139953101723 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419275847643 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526501905799 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754982578373 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065274447321 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.