How do movies or television influence people`s behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Television undoubtedly has a great impact on people. Personally, I think that movies and television benefit us in many ways. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a myriad of educational television programs helps people to increase intellectually, which in turn makes us interesting to communicate with. If a person has a wide ken, he can share his vast knowledge with others and make a lot of friends. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I truly enjoy watching the National Geographic Channel, which covers not only environmental problems but political and economic events from all around the world. In this way, by watching these materials I constantly learn something new. As a result, when I meet new people, I am able to maintain any topic and develop a conversation. Moreover, most of the time I watch the documentaries in English and with subtitles, so I continuously improve my language skills. Despite the fact that there are many other ways to gain expertise, the National Geographic channel is my favorite one. That is why I think that watching documentaries is advantageous for citizens.
Secondly, certain movies help us to become more kind and patient with each other, which makes our lives more peaceful and pleasant. Many films are based on true stories that have happened with real people, and so we can learn from their experience and avoid mistakes that characters made in our lives. For instance, originally I am from Russia and one particular war has had a huge significance for every person in my country because during this horrible event millions of Russians were killed or died from hunger. I have seen a myriad of movies about World War two and understood that people should not be judged accordingly to their race or nationality since this may cause numerous conflicts and deaths. Therefore, I have never been a racist and I have always treated all human beings equally. Although sometimes watching films about wars can be truly stressful, they teach us to respect and value each other and hence make us better.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that television and movies embellish our lives. This is because they help people to socialize and become better citizens.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97120418848 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81918213133 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0990853566 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.95 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698178687348 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261220473887 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353790239541 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623531125363 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320961104746 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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