Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is an arduous but tremendously important process and its quality depends on those who provide this. Personally, I think that parents are not great in teaching. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, parents are not knowledgeable in a variety of science, and so they do not have enough valuable information to share with their children. Professional teachers, on the other hand, know their subjects in detail and therefore can pass their expertise to their students. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a senior, I decided to become a pharmacist and in order to attend pharmacy school, I had to be adept in chemistry, biology, and physics. In this way, my mother hired tutors to make sure that I was able to pass the entrance exams. During private lessons, the instructors helped me to understand and master the most challenging for me topics. Despite the fact that my mother had a university degree herself, she could not provide me with the expertise that I needed since she had a major in a completely different field. This example illustrates my point of view.
Secondly, patents are often busy at work and they do not have time to teach their youngsters. These days, people who have families have to work hard to financially support their beloved ones, and so most of their time they spend at workplaces. For example, when my father passed away, my mother had to find a second job in order to pay bills and provide my brother and me with food and clothes. In this way, every day she left home early in the morning and came back late at night. She did not have an opportunity to help us with school assignments. Fortunately, my sibling and I had wonderful teachers who kept us motivated and not only helped us to increase intellectually but taught us social norms such as what kind of behavior was acceptable and what we should not do. As a result, we became respectful and lawful adults.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that professional instructors can teach students better than their parents would. This is because, professors have the necessary knowledge, and because this is their job to educate kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ause this is their job to educate kids.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77402597403 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73388684683 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561038961039 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3888477492 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809481978655 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265603310013 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254595646711 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475382944452 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178956402786 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.