How do movies or television influence people`s behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
“Television” that is famous for “one eye giant”, plays a vital role in our todays life. As other technological instruments, it has some positive and negative effects on people and their behavior. Besides its undeniable effects like informing, entertaining and creation increase, here I want to explore three negative influences of TV on people behavior.
First of all, TVs induce some negative cultures. Over buying is the most important effect of television on our cultures. Many programs consist of advertisements that every day people watch them and in most cases they try to buy some goods that they don’t want it, in fact. In addition, many films and series are casted on television that have inappropriate senses or even behaviors that in long time influence people behavior or attitude. Children sometimes do violent actions or speak impolitely influenced by TV programs. Moreover, sometimes adults are not excluded and they are influenced by some incorrect behavior or conversations.
Another negative effect of TV is that it makes us inactive. When we want to watch TV, we should sit down and don’t do anything except for changing channels by remote controls. This takes us an hour or more in some cases. So, little by little we used to do nothing but TV watching. Therefore, sport activities and doing creative entertainments are removed from our lives. On the other hand, laying in one place and watching TV results overweighting which is the source of other illnesses.
Finally, TV influence our health. Watching violent programs makes us nervous and impatient. Studies show that watching action movies increase blood pressure and heart beat. Also, children sometimes do abnormal movements in result of watching action or violent movies. Even creational movies like Harry potter or etc. makes them to expect incorrect activities.
In total, TV as a part of our life, in spite of many interest and entertaining and educational programs, has its own disadvantages. We should be aware of them and try to decrease harmful influences of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun interest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many interests'.
Suggestion: many interests
..., TV as a part of our life, in spite of many interest and entertaining and educational progra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, except for, in addition, in fact, first of all, in most cases, in some cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25825825826 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05537219717 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.345854233 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1304347826 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4782608696 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52173913043 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203775030314 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538447661083 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481637654946 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10961867509 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668523188785 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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