People Attend College Or University For Many Different Reasons (for Example, New Experiences, Career Preparation, Increased Knowledge). Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
The aims of people for attending university or college depend on their behaviors, favorites, circumstances and so on. These factors make the reasons of entering university. Among these reasons, preparing for job and increase knowledge are two important factors.
First, nowadays, along with technology advances, many companies need professional employees and well educated people who handle the works and come up with the improvements. Some of machines in the factories are run just by experts that can repair them as well. Most people who have high educational degrees have unique ideas and have the ability to use new technologies at work. Today, having and also correct using new technologies and being updated is essential to compete in global market. For example, in my major, electrical engineering, having updated information about new algorithms of system planning or advanced measuring information is crucial to work in distribution companies and do beneficial research that help these companies to reduce their losses.
Another reason to attend college or university is increasing knowledge. People in the university passes different courses that sometimes in their life may be useful. For me, in addition to reading books, having variety of courses cause me to get informed or at least made me eager to research about different cases. More over, when a person go to university, he/she has the opportunity to get familiar with new people and uses their information. As well, align with new advances make our life easier. as an example: using on line shops or using electronic banking services.
When people have better information and attitude of their world, they can easily communicate with others. In addition, be aware of new instruments helps people to live convenient. This is the reason why some people attend universities in old ages. Using new technologies like internet and so on make them happier and fresh.
It must be said as a conclusion that finding a job and increasing information are the most important reasons people attend universities. Other factors, for instance, new experience are considered as second level reasons. In my opinion, other factors are subsets of these two reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the machines') or simply say ''Some machines''.
Suggestion: Some of the machines; Some machines
...orks and come up with the improvements. Some of machines in the factories are run just by expert...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...these companies to reduce their losses. Another reason to attend college or univ...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...with new advances make our life easier. as an example: using on line shops or usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30113636364 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88053612685 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576704545455 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8417315339 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329125495219 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101895590073 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949443507274 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198870156394 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065317834018 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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