A Foreign Visitor Has Only One Day To Spend In Your Country. Where Should This Visitor Go On That Day? Why? Use Specific Reasons And Details To Support Your Choice.
My country, IRAN, has wonderful places and natures all over it. At the same time, one side of it has a warm weather however, in the other side of the country people experience a cool or even cold weather. Totally, visit a big country like Iran in one day is hard and it depends to the interest of the foreigner. Here I will explain some cities that worth going for a one-day trip.
Isfahan is a big city with ancient places like bridges, mosques, squares and houses that reflect ancient Persia and their art and real culture. Crossing a beautiful river named "Zayanderoos" in the city, has made it charming. Also, Isfahan has special foods that is interesting for foreigners like Beryani, Fereni and so on.
Shiraz is another city with wonderful places specially in spring. Sa'adi and Hafez ?, Eram Park and beautiful streets with pleasant weather are some features that attracts anybody. If a tourist like poem and literature, this city is the best choice.
Tehran as a capital city has attracting places. It is often crowded but beautiful parks, different facilities like huge museums, theaters, cinemas are somewhere to make people entertained. visiting big and really beautiful palaces is another advantage of going to Tehran. Tochal, Darake, Darband and so on are some places around Tehran that have worth seeing.
because of many companies, big factories, big universities and different job opportunities Tehran has attracted many people of all over Iran to continue their educations in its universities, finding jobs or at least enjoy different facilities of Tehran that are not exist in other cities. Therefore, you can see many people with varieties of cultures and accent or languages that live with each other in Tehran. North of Iran has huge forests that are green over the year. These places have spectacular sites that most people like.
Totally, there are different Places in Iran that are interesting for people. Beautiful mountains full of snow in all over the year, deserts in the middle of Iran, north forests. All depends to your choice of going abroad. All season you can enjoy visiting Iran because of different weather that is exist here.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Visiting
...e somewhere to make people entertained. visiting big and really beautiful palaces is ano...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... around Tehran that have worth seeing. because of many companies, big factories, big u...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...erent facilities of Tehran that are not exist in other cities. Therefore, you can see...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...an because of different weather that is exist here.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01657458564 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67869189462 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6016079515 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690962971078 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247965621538 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419805974397 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376875879346 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398905685964 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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