Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Today, people argue about living in small towns or big cities more and more. In spite of some disadvantages like pollution, noises, traffic and so on that exist in big cities, I prefer to live in a big city. More facilities, job opportunities, and easy transportation are some reasons that are important for me to choose a city to live in.
Theatre, more cinemas with great facilities, huge and beautiful parks often exist in a big city. People visits museums and spectacular areas like famous gardens, ancient places, zoos, … and enjoy it. Amusement parks are located in big cities. Shopping malls are another cases that are found there. Shopping in huge mall with various choices in food, clothes, cosmetics and other goods are exciting. Although it is crowded in these places but it worth’s to enjoy. The latest products from different brands are shown in a big city that you can provide.
Job opportunities is another reason. Many factories, companies and offices exist that people can work there. If you lose your job, you can find new ones. In addition, for a determined kind of job, you can have more choices to apply. Also, people pay more for their convenience and thus, there are a lot of choices to do in a big city.
Although there is traffic in big cities but it doesn’t matter. Public transportation is provided to profit. You can go everywhere in cities by public transportation like trains and buses. But, in small towns there is not active public transportation unless for special places and streets. Therefore, transportation in big cities become cheap. Also, taxis are more and you don’t need to use your own car even when you hurry. Sometimes, it is interesting to trip by trains and visits other people.
In small towns these facilities are either less or not. For me, living in a big city is exciting and I prefer to live there. Although, it may be sometimes tiring and dangerous, but, the factors above are more important to select.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83775811209 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72567648671 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5660399749 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.56 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287506735531 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725893014811 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828320587425 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169292135728 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959270475748 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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