How do movies or television influence people`s behaviour? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
It is a widely supported idea that people are changing and influencing by the programs of television shows or movies. Publics learn about life, styles, histories, landscapes and to name a few which are manipulating them insightfully. My next sentences will explore the reasons how we influencing by the entertaining mediums day by day.
First and foremost, there are lots of movies which are designed for learning alongside business purposes. These films presents biographies, histories, or social problems. Actually, these movies convey some large messages for nations and lineages. We can change our conventional views about social facts such as we might have negative impacts on a person, but his biographical documentary or film can change our view about him. Also, we can learn many things from the lives of such persons. In addition, sometimes lots of movies are based on the historical events which teach us that we should not do the mistakes as the movies present.
Secondly, young people, specifically, the youths are very enthusiastic about the personal lives and styles of the celebrities that's why these fans follow them and replicate their styles. For example, when people notice that Lionel Messi or Christiano Ronaldo has changed his hairstyle, then the followers resembles these styles. Likewise, there many types of dresses are worn by the superheroes of the action movies, so young kids who love these fictitious characters, always try to copy the styles.
Furthermore, science fiction and detective movies are made so that scientist or students can think about the improvement of technology. For instance, the bullet-proof car of Mr. James Bond created aspiration to the engineers and they finally became successful by developing such a car. Also, closely we can notice that the movies on astrophysics such as " Gravity", "Space between us" and to name a few are the good source of learning about the space.
In essence, the aforesaid points illustrate that we are involving in all the moment to the new passion from watching the different genres of movies. Thus, I think movies and televisions are getting popular since they are influencing people by their content, styles, and presentations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31179775281 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88190063698 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4308123208 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156396173599 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505444063903 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633864707807 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907250600376 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518978883815 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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