If people want to contribute to the society, which of the following is the best way?
A. riding bicycle or walking on foot
B. recycling the waste
C. buy local organic food.
Societies have different elements, all of which affect a society in a way or another. But the most influential part of a society is its people. People can contribute to their environment in various ways. Some try to use organic local foods, some try to recycle their waste instead of throw it away and so on. In addition to these activities, people can also have great impact on a weather of a place. I myself suggest riding our own bicycles to help our societies and environments for two main reasons and the ensuing paragraphs will elaborate rationale behind my statement.
To commence with, as all of us know, bicycles do not produce any carbon dioxide and nitrogen based pollutants, therefore they are an excellent solution to reduce the air pollution in cities. As a result, we can use bikes in order to improve the weather of our towns, by this way the rate of heart and lung diseases can be diminished, as the national health research institute of Iran announced that the average rate of lung cancer near big cities which are full of cars is much more than their neighbors that people use bikes instead of cars.
Another significant reason that deserves attention is the traffic people suffered in cities which people use their individual cars. Although people can use their bicycles for reducing this traffic, they do not use them. You can see cars with just one guy driving all around cities. People in these cities can build especial route for their bikes. For instance, in my home town, people encourage each other to use their own bicycles and they also build roads next to main streets in all city.
To take all above factors into consideration, not only can people help themselves by using their bikes but also they can contribute to their societies in different ways, in which being healthy is one of them. They also can reduce heavy traffics in big cities. Hence, it is wise to use bicycles in order to help ourselves and societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74193548387 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47845525086 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536656891496 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.708763352 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134179161506 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494799042795 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311903899741 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888670739259 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325125992092 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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