If you get homesick during your trip which of the following activities do you would be beneficial 1 Make new friends in new community 2 Maintain a contact with people in your hometown 3 Try special food in the new community | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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If you get homesick during your trip, which of the following activities do you would be beneficial. 1. Make new friends in new community 2. Maintain a contact with people in your hometown 3. Try special food in the new community

It goes without saying that homesick is one of the worst feelings in the world. There has been a controversial debate among migrators and travelers feeling homesick as to what the best way to cope with feeling homesick is. From my perspective, making new friends in the new society will be helpful, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are presented as follows.
To begin with, having friendship with some people, we will definitely adapt every difficult situation. It is not a secret to anyone that humans are considered as social creatures that are interested in communicated with their counterparts, so it is our nature to have relationship with others. Acting and behaving according to our instinct, we will be able to heal our mental problems sooner. Friends are the most important part of everybody's life since they share feelings and stories which makes them to feel comfortable and get rid of their stress; making friends in new communities is noticeable because it will give a sense of belonging to those living there and to the country. As a result friends help newcomers to adjust new circumstances being hard or easy because new people who are not native will have an opportunity to share their feelings and cope with new situations. Rarely are migrators interested in coping with such feelings alone.
Furthermore, having friends in new country and society, we will enjoy the living which helps us to forget about homesickness and gloominess. It is crystal clear that one of the most effective ways to feel better is occupying our minds with enjoyable thoughts and activities; friends usually create funny moments in which we are able to completely be satisfied with the living. Going to the movies, playing a musical instrument, or working out are a kinds of activities that generate happiness and satisfaction, so having fun with friends is helpful to escape from the clutches of depression or other detrimental emotions. To put it in more vivid picture, when I was a university student in different city, which was far away from my hometown, I felt homesick for a week until I met my best friend Zeynab, who was funny and intelligent. We spend most of weekend going out of dormitory playing or watching movies which were helpful in the process of healing depression. Had I not met Zeynab, I would have had difficulty coping with tough situations because of depression.
In sum, not only will we able to share feelings with friend, we will also do enjoyable activities which make us satisfied with the living

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 883, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Rarely
... feelings and cope with new situations. Rarely are migrators interested in coping with suc...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kind' or simply 'kinds'?
Suggestion: a kind; kinds
... musical instrument, or working out are a kinds of activities that generate happiness a...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, as to, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92974238876 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79201700193 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519906323185 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7091500501 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5625 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234602683174 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791125071855 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609510097568 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152540467411 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302141910501 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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