If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire : an experienced worker at a higher salary or inexperienced worker at a lower salary?
Workers are important in every sector of the world in order to carried out the work effectively and correctly that benefits both the particular sectors as well as its users. In every sector there is always need of workers who are well experienced in order to carried out work more effectively and to understand the users feelings and opinion in the correct way. So, if I were an employer, I would prefer an experienced worker at higher salary rather than inexperienced worker at lower salary. In order to support my answer I have some reasons which are explained below.
The experience worker are important in every sectors to make a better decision, policy and plans in order to make the working efficiency of particular sector more effective. Let us take an example of a business company, there is a required of an experience worker in order to make the policy, plan and decision which helps to make the better profit for the company. If the company put the inexperience worker by paying the low salary then it will cause the overall loss to the company because the inexperience worker do not know well to analyze the situation of market and make the proper decision, plan and policy.
Similarly, if the researcher wants to carried out the research projects regarding to the various field than he prefer more to experience worker through paying the higher salary because there is always a need of precise data measurement in the research area and any mistake lead to the error in the data analysis, results, finding and interpretation of results. In the research activities of agricultural sector, the worker must know how to take the measurement of various parameters, how to use the different measuring instrument like caliper, scale, etc., how many sample should be used to take the measurements and so on. In this situation if the researcher employs the inexperience worker by providing low salary than it will cause the error at every stage of the measurement and results the unreliable results and findings.
So, there is always the need of the experience worker at every sector either in business or in the research area in order to make the work, plan and results more preferable and reliable. That’s why, if I were an employer, I would prefer an experienced worker at higher salary rather than inexperienced worker at lower salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...at benefits both the particular sectors as well as its users. In every sector there is alw...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
... regarding to the various field than he prefer more to experience worker through payin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, similarly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91478696742 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75434605593 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423558897243 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8651560822 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.416666667 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398459229358 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189006077285 0.076458572812 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219147160102 0.0737576698707 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298439189503 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15535955754 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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