If your friend wants to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest?
1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.
2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.
3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home
Without any doubts, all of us would face the situation of being short of money. If a friend of mine asks me for advises to cut the living cost, I will definitely tell him or her to find a roommate. The reasons are as follows.
To start with, sharing the room provides lots of beneficial byproducts other than lowing the cost. A friend is always a great helping hand. Living by ourselves, we have to deal with a lot of dilemmas on our own. When pressure and difficulty comes, we cannot always ask for family’s help simply because they will worry about us, also, they are not able to offer us help from our hometowns which are far away from us in some cases. This is the time when friends’ help shows its importance. Staying with us, they can comfort us right in time. I still remember that when I was in my college, my roommate tried very hard to encourage me to take another TOEFL test after I failed for the first time. I believe lots of people would share the same experience as me.
To make it even further, having a roommate would not lower our 猜词互动 . When it comes to “cutting expense”, naturally, we will think of a lower standard of life. If I ask people whether they want to give up smart phones or eat worse food in order to lower the living expense, in most cases, the answer would be “no”. Sharing room with a roommate, we can still buy things we like and eat the food we prefer. In a word, we don’t have to compromise to the reality and sacrifice our life quality. I met some students before who did not buy any electronic products just because they wanted to save some money, yet every time when the professor asked us to search some information online, they had to go very far just for using computers in the library. By finding a roommate, their financial problems could be easily handled.
Admittedly, having a roommate can bring problems sometimes, like schedule conflicts or even fights over different opinions. Nevertheless, instead of having a random person to share a room, we can try to find an ideal roommate by posting messages on the website or asking friends or teachers to recommend some students for us.
As what has been illustrated, having a roommate will totally do the trick.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'cutting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cutting
...If a friend of mine asks me for advises to cut the living cost, I will definitely tell...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, in most cases, in some cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64267990074 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63518320436 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578163771712 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0571036929 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0952380952 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154656750202 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462694605469 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316707268856 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884802513471 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320661817176 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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