Imagine you have been offered jobs by two different companies at the same rate of pay. One of the companies will provide you with many interesting and challenging projects to work on, but it offers very few vacation days. The job at the other company do not seem very interesting or challenging, but offer more vacation days. Which job would you prefer and why?
The world has lots of different types of jobs, and everyone has their preferred notably jobs. This results in different views on whether a job offering more vacation days is better than an interesting and challenging job. I take the position that a job with many interesting and challenging projects to work on will be a perfectly acceptable choice for me.
To begin with, a job providing lots of interesting and challenging projects could let have more chances to improve my professional skills and get more opportunities to promote. For example, I used to work in a big software company offering a variety of creative projects to its employees because I could learn an abundance of practical knowledge, like C++ or Java. On one hand, I actually improve my software skill by completing many particularly arduous tasks. On the other hand, I
can be appreciated by my colleagues and supervisors and gain more promotion chances. By contrast, if I choose a job providing more vacation days, I will not be capable of obtaining some precious chances to better my professional skills and career.
Secondly, a job offering many interesting and challenging projects could make our life valuable and meaningful. For instance, I tend to put my all energy into accomplishing projects having a few tough issues to solve, such as resolving some clients’ problems. In this way, I could gain valuable a sense of achievement and make a little difference to my company and society. Instead, if I choose a job offering more vacation days, I will not have these kinds of precious opportunities to advance my career and have a brighter future.
To sum up, these are the two reasons why I prefer a job providing more interesting and challenging projects. This kind of job not only can make me boost my practical skills but also will let me have a more meaningful life. Therefore, I think a job offer more interesting or challenging projects fit my life best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arly arduous tasks. On the other hand, I can be appreciated by my colleagues and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91515151515 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00208681629 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1865312129 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311565022178 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117144084245 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661164719296 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186211281669 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665126790847 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.