Imagine you have been offered jobs by two different companies at the same rate of pay. One of the companies will provide you with many interesting and challenging projects to work on, but it offers very few vacation days. The job at the other company do not seem very interesting or challenging, but offer more vacation days. Which job would you prefer and why?
To begin with, a job providing lots of interesting and challenging projects could let have more chances to improve my professional skills and get more opportunities to promote. For example, I used to work in a big software company offering a good deal of creative projects to its employees. When I was a rookie, I actively asked my supervisor to assign a little few more tough tasks for me and spent lots of time on accomplishing these works. In the beginning, I didn’t often understand how to deal with these technical issues, but I strived for these projects with a great effort and accumulated many practical experiences. As a result, I usually obtained an A on my performance evaluation, which could benefit my career development a lot. For one thing, I could learn an abundance of greatly useful knowledge, like C++ or Java. For another thing, I could gain more opportunities to be promoted by achieving a couple of crucial missions. By contrast, if I choose a job providing more vacation days, I will not be capable of getting some precious chances to better my professional skills and future career development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 658, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: an; A
...iences. As a result, I usually obtained an A on my performance evaluation, which cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, another thing, for example, as a result, for another thing, for one thing, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86910994764 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08324958503 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1120972743 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 5.45110844103 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145571913801 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610082122348 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588765360005 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145571913801 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.