Independent Task from Toefl Sampler
I disagree about the statement “always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people’’. Perhaps, this can be a realistic notion, but I follow two reasons and examples which support my opinion.
First of all, I am inclined to believe that the truth is a significant aspect when we talk about relationships in general. In my point of view, there is not people’s ties without truth, even though, it is not totally necessary. One day, for example, I planned a surprise to my mother and while that, she was looking what exactly I was doing and then, I could not tell about it, I lie to her. Some people think it is wrong lie to your own mother, but I considered not mention it for a good cause and even lying, I did her happy.
In the second place, tell the truth can lead bad situations in relationships. From my point of view, sometimes, people do not want to know about it and just ignore personal facts, opinions and advises. A couple years ago, I had chance to tell the truth about the end of my friend’s relationship with her ex-boyfriend. She did not get my words for granted. Moreover, she thought that I was planning do something bad in her relationship. That was awful, because I almost lost her friendship and I was just trying to be honest and act like a true friend.
In conclusion, those are my reasons about why I disagree that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. People’s relations involve different personalities and traits, especially when they are sensitive and emotional. I do not think that not talk real things with people we have feelings and ties it is a better option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in the second place, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02581485811 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3531852006 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0102959191247 0.236089414692 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00403745734794 0.076458572812 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0151067821097 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00567151536035 0.150856017488 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00982335276003 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.