independentTpo42
In today modern life people spend a large percentage of their time doing their jobs. So it is crystal clear that they should place much emphasis on the importance of job selections. In numerous circle of jobs, researchers has divided the people in tow distinctive cluster. The first groupe are satisfied with multiplicity task jobs and the second is pleased with monotony jobes. While some people inclined toward the diversity task jobs, on the other extreme of the rope the opposite view has its own proponent. I'm for one, interested into the first groupe and to some extend think that all job should be in this way. In what follow I will aptly substantiate my view points.
The first aspect of the current discussion which demand a keen contemplation is that, doing the same work all the day long make people bored and exhusted. So they deleberately inclined to stop work at least for a while in some stages. This approach to work result in decreasing the productivity of individuals. To clarify, as they perform a routine work all the day, they might lose creativity and ingenuity in their work. If they continue the same work for a long time it may threaten their mind and physical health. For example, speaking of the past, due to simplicity of works, people were multi skill. In recent ages, nonetheless technology has developed, more and more people are fascinated by multiplicity task and interdisciplinary works which need a tremendous kind of skills. As a matter of fact those works bringe about so much excitment that cant not been achived through routin works.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that depending upon culture, personality traits and age we find that people who have challenging jobs, show much more expert in tackling the problems of their life. Simply stated, their mind are accustomed to solve problems. Our minds in many aspect are so similar to muscles. If you train your mind, it would be productive and enhance their potentials. To shed more light on the issues, according to the result of the new surveys, prospective persons had more challenging and multiplicity works in their first years of employee. So if we target to be successful we should experience some form of difficult work in which to blossom.
To sum up, based on the discussion and by taking all the aforementioned ideas into consideration it can easily uphold that if people assigned to do ordinary task they could becom bored and overwhelmed by dissatisfaction and it also cused their mind to be useless and inefficient which explicitly affect their life. So I'm of the opinion that they should select divers task works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...he opposite view has its own proponent. Im for one, interested into the first grou...
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Line 1, column 570, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ested into the first groupe and to some extend think that all job should be in this wa...
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Line 2, column 785, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...which need a tremendous kind of skills. As a matter of fact those works bringe abo...
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Line 2, column 853, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rks bringe about so much excitment that cant not been achived through routin works. ...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to solving'.
Suggestion: accustomed to solving
...eir life. Simply stated, their mind are accustomed to solve problems. Our minds in many aspect are ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ustomed to solve problems. Our minds in many aspect are so similar to muscles. If you train...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...works in their first years of employee. So if we target to be successful we should ex...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... which explicitly affect their life. So Im of the opinion that they should select ...
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Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'divers'' or 'diver's'?
Suggestion: divers'; diver's
... of the opinion that they should select divers task works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, while, at least, for example, kind of, speaking of, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89955357143 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76586099535 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2523040797 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4347826087 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4782608696 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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