It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent's jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parent's job.
It is generally believed that parents have some influence on their children in terms of choosing profession. However, the question remains whether children have to follow their parents rout in that regard, or not. Personally, I am prone to believe that descendants should continue their family traditions and choose work that is similar to their parents' ones. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it would ease the career path of children. As we know, every profession has its difficulties which might be overcome with the help of adult family members. This is explained by the fact that parents have huge experience to share with their kids, and kids do not have to learn on their own errors and failures. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was choosing my profession of a lawyer, I was sure that my father's legal career would assist me a lot. In fact, I was not mistaken. My fathers' advices allowed me to become a successful legal practitioner, whose company employs almost one hundred other lawyers.
Additionally, it would save money. This is due to the necessity to improve one's skills and deepen knowledge constantly irrespective of what profession one chooses. Nowadays, it is not sufficient to graduate from university in order to become a successful professional. One needs to take relevant courses which should be paid, or participate on conferences held in other cities, etc. On the other hand, having a family member who has the same profession as one has implies that one can permanently refer to his or her parents and to learn from them. For instance, my cousin, who is a dentist, never pays for improving his qualification. Instead, he always tries to learn any relevant new information from his mother - a well-known dentist and surgeon. Thus, he can deepen his knowledge without taking any courses and so forth.
To sum up briefly, choosing a profession is not an easy thing. However, often the key to success is choosing your parents' job. Its explanation is twofold: first, it is easier to overcome difficulties with the advice of experienced parents, and, second, that kind of choice allows you to save money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
...This is due to the necessity to improve ones skills and deepen knowledge constantly ...
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Suggestion:
...ind of choice allows you to save money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in fact, kind of, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91466666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79133078615 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4758268956 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7727272727 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213402335673 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569710835341 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810069456606 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13227906461 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811784837229 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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