It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
There are 2 groups of family in the world; the first group bring up their children in village and think that it is the best way, another group think that village is the worse place because it doesn’t offer enough opportunities
Firstly, I am totally agreed with these families who take their children to the countryside to live because it will provide children with sufficient fresh air. Fresh air is the most needed thing for people, especially in childhood. No pollutant air will be in a contact with your children, also no traffic will take their time. You parents and children will have some more time to spend together in the countryside than in the city. Sometimes living in the city will make you anxious because of some aspects like traffic, commotion and etc. and it will affect your personal life.
Nevertheless, living in the countryside also will deprive your child of some real life aspects. For example, to confront with traffic problem, of course, it has some negative aspects but traffic will teach children how to be patient, if we put it simply, it will prepare smalls for future life. Secondly, city life will provide you and your child with lot opportunities like a career, entertain and etc.
Moreover, sad but true if you want you child to be educated and definitely you have to choose city life because in our countryside there are not good enough teachers to teach. Education is second to none, that is the reason why most of the families must choose to live in the city.
In conclusion, for sake of your children, you have to choose the city for them to live the better life, even if the city has pollutant air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73702422145 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45239147928 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487889273356 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.155008681 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195541924359 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825288209313 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465241580733 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114714533428 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454053407085 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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