Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
A glance at gathering money for the future always bring a light question that several times provoked discussions, that is, whether we should save our earning or it is just better to spend it off. Some people might contend that rasing deposit is crucial for your stable future. However, I would like to sugget that it is much helpful to concentrate in the present rather than the yet to come future. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will try to shed some light on this point of view with ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned firstly is that you cannot enjoy so much as you get old. The anecdote of my mom will demostrate this standpoint well. She did not have much chance of traveling abroad, since she always had to pay for the rent and afford my schooling. After she turned 40, slowly she had the little chances to trip around Europe and Ameria, but most of the journey was to stressful and exhausting for her due to her age issue. This shows that delaying the joyful moment to your past is not a good option.
Another point to be mentioned is that even if you raise your money, it hard for youngsters to buy a house. To be specific, untill the late 20 century, it was possible for the normal citizen to own their apartment after raising their salary for couple of years. As a result, most of the real estates are owned by elder people, and since the rent business is so beneficial for them, there is no chance for younger people to own a single room inside the city they are living in.
Although the foregoing reasons cross the mind at a first sight, it does no mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is anothe subtle point which have to be borne in mind. It sould be noted that youngsters would rather spend their money on coffee or avocado, which elders hate to see them doing it. This kind of behavior derives from the depressing present that assures no single fixed hope for the future. So the increasing demand for the extravaganza is a obvious outcome.
Due to the above mentioned groud, I firmly believe that it is better to enjoy the present rather than giving them up and delay the present joy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: CD_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
...use. To be specific, untill the late 20 century, it was possible for the normal citizen...
Line 4, column 463, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...creasing demand for the extravaganza is a obvious outcome. Due to the above ment...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, as to, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47208121827 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26739399393 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.617158777 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214130922463 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059051091441 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628245704049 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107503886129 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555072549482 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.