Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
One of the best decision in the life of a person is saving money for his future. Some people think that it is better to spend their money when they earn it. Others, like me, believe that is more important save a percentage of all our money and only use the necessary funds. Is crucial that all the people have money for emergencies. Second, because of is easier save money month by month and in a medium period, we can buy big things such as a house or a car.
First and foremost, I firmly believe that it is better to save a considerable percentage of our money in the bank because of is probably that some moment we can address a big problem or health emergency. For instance, two years ago, at the drop of a hat my mother suffered an infection and immediately, my father and I take her to the hospital. I remember that this event required a considerable amount of money, for that reasons our savings was significant. In this sense, all of us can face a similar problem in any time of our life, for that reason is essential not waste all our money in useless things.
Another important point is that we can save a percentage of all our money every month to buy great things such as a house, a car or travel around the world. For instance, last year I wasted all my money on worthless elements such as food or clothes, but this year I have set out to save a significant part of my money to travel with my boyfriend. In this way, I learned that it is better to keep funds in my bank account and enjoy later inessential things.
In sum, the way of people invest their money is an each one's problem, but I think that is more worthy save our money and enjoy it later in a crucial reason. Finally, I would recommend to all the children must learn to keep their money in a piggy bank with the main purpose of they determine the best way to use their money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24225352113 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37152987283 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467605633803 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9851267199 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25753273566 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109125438452 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487344124455 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176639468496 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442075570934 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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