Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
With consumerism gaining its popularity, nowadays, people tend to spend money right after they earned it. some have even gone so far to rely on their credit card to spend money before they earn it. In my opinion, we should be careful of the trend and make consumption decisions based on the consciousness of knowing what we really need. what is meant is, we can enjoy the money when we’ve made it, with an eye to saving some money for future's needs.
To start it off, after earning some money, we certainly should please ourselves with it - buying new clothes and electrical devices, having fun with friends, or grabbing a bite in a favorite restaurant, to name a few. For most people out there, no money is easily earned. Therefore, we should reward ourselves for the hard work put into it. Not only a sense of rewarding could make us feel jolly, it could also endow us motivation to achieve better results in future's work.
However, we should also save a certain amount of money for the future. As is known, none can predict the future with full certainly. there will always come a time when we meet contingents that cry out for a big amount of money, such as health problems, a desirable tour to a foreign country, or some type of niche we can investment upon. Insurance could cover part of it, but won’t work for other kinds of big-ticket plans. if no money saved, we would have no hope of implementing it other than sit and watch it go by.
Furthermore, as you can see, delayed satisfaction can lead to a greater extend of pleasure. if we only focus on short-term wants and make purchase decision based upon them, chances are high that the things we buy would easily go useless and be put on the shelf dusted. A pointedly delayed spending would force us to see things in long-term, through which we have a better chance of making wise decisions. r.
To sum it up, with the money we make, we can entertain ourselves fairly timely but also save a portion for future’s needs. This would help us make ends meet in the long run and serve us better ultimately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56684491979 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49134894295 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585561497326 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.860766201 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195284243944 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698358140858 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520191691368 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12061752647 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478546860474 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.