When you face difficult problems in life,what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
these days people face new problems every day and often find themselves in a dilemma. In order to better address these issues, some people go seeking help from more experienced ones, while others may prefer tackling difficult problems by thinking a long time independently. personally, I like to surf the internet and look for information about the problem. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the internet has a tremendous amount of information, so we have a better chance of acquiring pertinent information about the problem we meet and solve it. Nowadays, with the rapid development of social sharing platforms like Facebook, YouTube and Reddit, an increasing number of people are posting their thoughts, opinions, and news online. if we see a difficult problem, chances are high that other people have been down the same road, and even better for us, these people may have written about how they grappled with it. we can handily read about their experiences and listen to their advice for our own note. my personal experience is a compelling example of that. when I just graduated from high school, I was facing the hard choice of choosing my university. Unfortunately, I was the first one to be accepted in my big family, so I had no one I knew to ask for help at that time. I searched the internet and spent plenty of time researching on my potential choices. consequently, I made my decision with confidence and I have never regretted it.
Secondly, the internet has a variety of opinions regarding different issues, thus providing a big picture concerning each problem for us. if we consult our family or friends on some problem, chances are high that merely one or two of them, if any, have been through that kind of situation. As a consequence, they can only provide us with very limited personal experience, which in turn will give us a distorted view of the problem and decrease the chance of properly handling it.
To sum it up, when faced with difficult problems, I think the best way to tackle them is looking for relevant information about it online. this is because it will enhance the possibility of finding helpful advice, and because it gives us a more comprehensive view of the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i feel, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83418367347 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76246064724 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3377846717 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.277777778 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140542690639 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044444913058 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505528901612 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103971530327 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050224824034 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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