When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
Solving the problems, as we all know, is a very crucial issue that the majority of modern human beings struggle with. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating its effectiveness have always been among the top priorities of the sociologist. In this regard, many people support this opinion that when a person faces difficult issues, it is far better to use their own experiences to solve the problem. Similarly to common belief, I believe that in addition to self-experiences, consulting to a psychologist could be beneficial, as well. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that solving the problem is easier if a person uses the psychologist advises is related to the mental capacity that everyone has in dealing with hard situations. Undoubtedly, life has become complicated, nowadays, which means everybody should spend much more time on a subject than a person spends in the past. Sadly, the mind`s capacity is limit, and one can solve just a specific number of issues spontaneously. Scientifically speaking, the number of serious problems a person can afford in a week is around two or three issues. What would happen if a person exposed to countless issues at the same time? The first thing that refers to the mind as an influential tool to help people is psychological support, certainly. Without a doubt, sometimes, people have faced the problems that go beyond their mental ability, and imprison them in a fake cycle. Unfortunately, the more a person tries to get rid of this cycle, the more she or he overwhelmed by the problems. Therefore, a consult a person can give from an expert, sometimes, can make an unresolved problem into an easy one.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind emanated from a belief that says, “Experience is the best teacher,” so people believe that for solving problems, they should refer to their experiences. It is common knowledge that humans are born with an instinct to build their way even among the problems, and solving the issues on their own will improve this ability. To illustrate, people these days do not look at issues as a big deal; rather, they seize this opportunity to enhance their solving problem skills. Take my personal experience as an example. A couple of years ago, when I was a little younger than now, I used to struggle with a serious problem for a while. Once, one of the friends of mine provided me a genius solution that she used in every difficulty she endured. She advised me to be aware of my reactions to the problems. She also taught me that based on the difficulty I beard, I could enhance the solution I had applied before when I expose to the issue. Fortunately, it was totally applicable and can reduce the level of tension I tolerate when I being exposed to serious issues.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that to solve an issue, both personal experiences and psychological help are helpful because they make the problem much easier and more solvable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2586.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94455066922 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91236036161 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523900573614 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4861905669 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7916666667 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148125637862 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378156109526 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382153820676 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863140104216 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207356472664 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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