Following are three choices to protect the local environment. Which one do you think is the best and explain why.
1. Plant trees and create gardens
2. Local shops do not provide consumers with plastic bags
3. Take public transportation and reduce the use of private cars on local roads
us">Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today."
us">With the purpose of environment protection and the consideration of convenience brought by enhanced public transit system, an increasingly amount of people start to take buses or undergrounds for commuting. This leads to some people thinking that there will be fewer cars in use in the future. Personally, I think chances are high that there will be even more cars in twenty years than today. I will clarify my idea with three reasons.
us">Firstly, cars are more convenient than public transit for most people. we have more freedom when we drive a car than taking a public vehicle. that is, we can go anytime we want, stop somewhere close to our destination, thus saving time and avoiding the hassle of catching buses or subways. Without a car, it usually takes more time to go someplace, which consequently, limits the range of our living area. take me as an example. Two years ago, when we had a child, my wife suggests that we should take the baby out to a park every Saturday. Initially, we took the subway to go to parks. Soon it became too much of trouble because of the baby’s trolley cart was not easy to take to the subway, and it also took us a lot of time to reach the subway station. After we bought a car, everything became much more convenient, hence making the excursions every week much more fun.
us">Secondly, the automobile industry is still a growing sector in many developing countries. The average car holder rate is still far below developed countries and it’s still in a growing trend in developing countries. take China for an example. During the past ten years, the growth of car sales has been increasing yearly. even so, only 1 out of 4 families own a car. With the growth of disposable income in less developed areas, it’s widely believed that we will see more cars sold in the coming years.
us">Last but not least, cars will be more environment friendly in the coming years, which will reduce public concerns of the pollution it caused. Specifically, the advent of electric cars is reshaping the automobile industry today. instead of petroleum or diesel, electric cars are powered by electricity, which generates none, if any, toxic gas. The sale of electric care is boosting around the world as is widely seen as the future of automobiles. that will fundamentally change the view of environment conservationists and make more people willing to drive a car instead of taking public vehicles.
us">In conclusion, with the convenience of driving and the further development of electric cars, combined with the economic growth of developing countries, the number of cars is very likely to continue its growth in the coming 20 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, even so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00625 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01537653697 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529166666667 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1618901878 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4230769231 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895266912028 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311105259243 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361320282233 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588951507989 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348384720157 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.