Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A glance at living a rural life or a urban life brings a lights question that has several times provoked discussions, that is, whether a life in the countryside is better than the life in metropolis. Some people contend that living in the small town is cozier and healthier than the city life, where they have massive amount of pollution and too much population. However, I would like to suggest that the city life has many advantages as well that can even counterpart some of it's detrimental sides. In the ensuing paragrpah, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through amples examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned initially is that the life in a big city is much safer than living in a small town. There is a study that well proves this argument. The ministry of rural life Korea investigated the relationship between the rate of crimes that are reported and the actual crime rate being suspected. The result turned out that people in the countryside tend not to report the crimes they witnessed, or even in the case of report, they often minimized the scale, especially when a rape case happened. The investigators assumed that the clsoe relationships prevented people from reporting to keep their community out of troblesome.
Another point to be mentioned is that it is way more convinient to live in a big city. My personal examples will demonstrate this standpoint. When I was young, I used to live in a small town in Joenrabukdo. One night I had a really high fever and the closest emergency hospital was around one and half hour by driving distance from my home. My parents did their best to carry me to the emergency room, but it was bit too late for the appropriate action and I lost around 10% of my hearing ability. This kind of case hardly happens to people who live in a metropolis, where they have all the facilities needed in a close distance.
Althoough the foregoing points cross the mind at a first sight, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It should be noted that the cultural establishment in rural and urban areas are not comprable. For example, around 80% of national museums, art galleries, theaters and art related educational intituitions are sholely concentrated in Seoul, in case of Korea. For this reason, I myself personally cannot aford a life in small town due to the lack of cultural instituitions.
Due to the abvoe mentioned ground, I firmly believe that a life in a metropolis or megapoils city is bettern than a life in a countryside, and safety and convinient issues are two prime and momentous reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
A glance at living a rural life or a urban life brings a lights question tha...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., especially when a rape case happened. The investigators assumed that the clsoe re...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ry me to the emergency room, but it was bit too late for the appropriate action and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71734475375 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76333828875 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52034261242 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4028578521 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.904761905 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150997683636 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497635847328 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666115286878 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738479172089 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499017463075 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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