Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Financial concerns have been a major part of people's decision-making processes in this modern world. This new era has brought many new and unique challenges that people need to be prepared to make well-informed decisions. As they mature, people appreciate financial independence from their families and also they want spend money on things they like to have. People may feel happy when they buy something or use a special service however, In my opinion, they should save for unexpected future concerns. This essay will discuss this matter thoroughly.
First of all, financial issues can attract various levels of attention among different people. Undoubtedly, mature people are more careful with the way they spend their money, while youngsters are less concerned with this matter. These young people may want to pay for many luxury commodities and products to feel happy in that moment. However, as they mature they feel the need to live separately from their parents to have the chance to experience the life on their own. One approach is to gain financial independence through which they can declare a state of freedom and independence to some extent. Therefore, they need to start saving what they earn by working hard, so they can enjoy it in the near future. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Once I obtain my visa to move to Australia, I began to save as much as I could which allowed me buy my own ticket, rent my own house and pay my bills. Now I am fully independent in terms of life expenses which gives me a good sense of responsibility. Not only can I manage my costs, but also I can spend my money to satisfy my needs.
In addition, another significant point to indicate is that as humans are entering a new age of modern world, they may face different and difficult challenges and situations for which they need to be financially prepared. There are many unpredicted emergencies that can happen to anyone such as natural disasters or accidents. Moreover, parents may need to save more money to be able to support their children in terms of college expenses, as they want a bright and guaranteed future for them. To manage such situations properly, people need to think about how they spend money and they need to be more careful about what they actually need and unnecessary things. My mother is a wise woman. She worked hard when she was young to support her family. She taught me the pleasure of spending money which was earned though hard work. Having a unique viewpoint towards life, she was able to save enough to send me and my brother to college so we could stand on out own feet in the future. I absolutely appreciate those lessons and what I have in life is because of the way she raised me.
In conclusion, although spending money on things and services we might like can make us feel better and happy, there are some moments in life that people need to have enough money to spend on unpredicted issues. Also, in order to be financially independent, it is better for people to save as much as they can, so they can begin their journey in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 9.8082437276 275% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 543.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69981583794 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59003628761 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0661506606 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8846153846 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118773104186 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366762815191 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412098100908 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907498094899 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317679622974 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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