Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
The new era has brought many challenges and severe changes and difficulties to our lives. Everyday though the media, people witness wars, disastrous earthquake and hunger around world. These incidents can have terrible effects on humans, and people in other parts of the globe should carefully consider these events which may be beneficial in predicting and preventing similar situations. I believe, people be informed about these kinds of events for some reasons. and this essay will discuss this matter.
First of all, humans are social creatures which are capable of interacting and communicating with other people. They have been familiarized with the merit of collective activities and the constructive results. Not all people have equal living conditions and some of us may suffer various difficulties which can be discouraging. Moreover, it is all people's responsibility to help others in times of need which is a valuable characteristic. For instance, last month there was an earthquake in one city of my country which devastated many homes and lives. As soon people were informed by the media, some of them packed necessary things and went there to help those poor people while others began to collect money to help them financially. Another interesting point was that, many people from other countries volunteered to go there to build temporary houses. For this reason, knowing about incidents throughout the world is absolutely important.
In addition, another significant point to mention is that history has many invaluable lessons for humans. Devastating consequences of wars, political corruptions and even a new discovery in a scientific field are good instances that can help people be well prepared for future. By learning from the past, people are not only able to make well-informed decisions, but they can also improve their abilities and skills to overcome such problems or use the a similar experience. For example, by observing the negative consequences of civil wars in the United States of America, people learned a worthwhile lesson which opened their eyes to prevent such disasters from happening again. Now, they are united and strong and they value their lives and treat each other with respect. Furthermore, governments can use the experiences of their counterparts by monitoring the results of certain actions and decisions. They can, for example, improve the election process of their countries by investigating good or bad results of elections in other countries. This is another reason why people and in particular communities, should pay more attention to events in the world.
In conclusion, there are many incidents happening in our planet which need full attention of people as they can learn a lot by observing and monitoring them. I believe, people should know about various events that may occur in other parts of the world because they can prevent many negative effects and also may be able to help other humans in times of need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...these kinds of events for some reasons. and this essay will discuss this matter. ...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...skills to overcome such problems or use the a similar experience. For example, by obs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2505.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25157232704 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83048216508 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513626834382 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7508118438 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.913043478 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105867018953 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362738884111 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362998467466 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771800772211 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209666085576 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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