In areas where there are many restaurants, some people prefer to buy their meals in restaurants very frequently, rather than cooking and eating meals at home. Other people prefer to cook most of their meals at home and only rarely eat in a restaurant. Which one would you choose and why?
These days people have various options for their meals to enjoy. They can go to many different restaurants and fast-food stores, or they can cook and prepare their own dish. Although it is easier to buy food at a restaurant, personally, I prefer to make my own meal for some reasons. This essay will discuss this matter.
First of all, people are working so hard every day to make money to spend on things they desire, and they may not have time to spend on personal matters such as cooking. Although, this is understandable that some people choose to go to a restaurant and have a delicious meal, cooking can be more beneficial for some reasons. Preparing food at home is a healthier approach because, for example, people can buy fresh food products and cook a healthy dish. Moreover, they have more options to enjoy. One can choose various food ingredients such as vegetables and cheese and mix them together to make a new dish which can be more enjoyable. So, they can ensure to maintain a healthy lifestyle by following some simple patterns.
In addition, cooking allows people to learn some useful skills. Not only they can study and try different cooking methods, but also they can improve their organizational skills which can help them manage their lives properly. I remember my mother always cooked patiently and accurately as it was a delicate job. She wanted to feed her children with healthy and delicious food, so she was very careful and followed detailed recipes to make a wonderful and tasty meal. As a result, she was a very successful woman both at work and at home, simply because she learned to consider details. Moreover, cooking is cost-effective and people can manage life expenses much easier by cooking at home instead of buying food at restaurants. This may help them save more money for the future or they can buy things they need the most.
In conclusion, people have less time to spend on cooking and they prefer to buy food outside of home. Although, it may seem better to pay for a meal, in my opinion, it is more beneficial, in terms of managing costs and maintaining a healthy lifestyle, to prepare our own food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...or their meals to enjoy. They can go to many different restaurants and fast-food stores, or th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73138297872 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56564863311 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507978723404 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1768700369 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6315789474 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282258176596 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998872001773 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802345699145 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203118528226 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534659215562 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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