Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world, having the opportunity to know about other cultures, languages and food habits in different parts of the world can help people gain valuable experience and knowledge. Traveling is definitely a great means to both learn many new things and have great moments in life. While some people may contend traveling alone and without an expert guide is better for them, I strongly believe is is both safe and pleasurable to have a tour guide accompanying a group of people. This essay will discuss this matter.
To begin with, traveling to other parts of the globe is an invaluable experience which can teach people many lessons. Through a journey to an interesting place, people can be introduced to new cultures and various lifestyles. They can learn how to communicate, how to make delicious food and how to spend a night in a forest without necessary tools which may be an amazing experience. However, there are some situations that require an expert leader who guide people through some hard journeys. For instance, some people may decide to climb a high and dangerous mountain. In such situation, it is better for them to ask a local person who is familiar with the easiest routes and can lead the group. That person may also know about necessary tools such as warm tents to spend some days in cold weather and harsh climate. For these reasons, it is absolutely reasonable to have a tour leader who knows how to survive.
In addition, another significant point to indicate is that a knowledgeable tour guide can make a trip more enjoyable. He may introduce people to interesting places and natural scenes which they can enjoy on their path. Moreover, a local guide can help people make delicious indigenous food from fresh vegetable and meat. Overall, a trip can become a pleasant experience with more enjoyable moments if a guide accompanies people on their journey. My own experience is a compelling example of this fact. Last year, my friends and I decided to go to camping in a far forest in my country. The forest is located on a cold mountain and we needed to prepare many tools and clothes. The problem was that we did not know how to camp, so we asked a local young man to come with us to share his knowledge and experience in exchange for food. He taught us how to climb, set up our tents and he even cooked for us. That was the most amazing traveling experience we had so far.
In conclusion, traveling is one the great ways people can increase their knowledge and gain valuable experience in life. Although, some people prefer to travel by themselves, in my opinion, people will benefit more from having a skilled tour leader who can guide people through harsh conditions and they also can have more fun.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... is better for them, I strongly believe is is both safe and pleasurable to have a tou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72860125261 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58383604328 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478079331942 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4025025467 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07914195618 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261552350711 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262064548259 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543735662063 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00621394069672 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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