In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Undoubtedly, people are living much longer today than people in the past. With the advances in science and technology, today's world is experiencing more effective medical treatments and people have learned the merits of healthy and enjoyable lifestyle. There many reasons for this phenomenon and this essay will discuss this matter in depth.
First of all, as humans are entering a new era they are witnessing how technology is progressing so quickly which has helped people in general and experts in particular in various ways. In the past, if someone became ill and was infected with a dangerous virus, he did not have many treatment options as doctors were less informed about how they can stop a virus from spreading and even how to prevent sick people from dying. Nowadays, thanks to the information flow and new methods physicians apply, less people become infected and by medicines they can cure many diseases. According to some conducted research at a prestigious medical university, within a certain period of time, experts could control perilous viruses and as a result, the world population has increased. Moreover, people have access to a wide variety of Internet resources which have allowed to prevent simple physical and mental disorders and illnesses.
In addition, another significant point to be mentioned is that people have been introduced to a new healthy lifestyle, for instance through the media, and now they appreciate such living experience even more than before. There are many constructive programs and course in schools and organizations which aim to inform people about how they can maintain a much healthier life through healthy food and regular exercise. Many people now spend some part of their time on exercising at gyms and many who do not have access to such facilities simply run which is considered beneficial for the body and mind. Moreover, they feel more energetic and less stressed. My own experience is a compelling example of this. In the past I did not have enough time to exercise and I did not have a healthy diet which made me less happy. Now, I run almost every day and try to eat vegetables and fruits as much as I can. As a result, I wake up in the morning feeling refreshed which has helped me to be more productive at my work.
In conclusion, there are many ways that have helped people to have a longer and happier lifestyle. Newly discovered medical approaches to treat many sicknesses are absolutely advantageous for people. Also, people can have healthy lifestyle just by following simple patterns in their daily diets and exercising on a regular basis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... flow and new methods physicians apply, less people become infected and by medicines...
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Line 3, column 667, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...us medical university, within a certain period of time, experts could control perilous viruses...
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Line 3, column 863, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'preventing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: preventing
...f Internet resources which have allowed to prevent simple physical and mental disorders an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99542334096 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69398494634 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535469107551 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9556611174 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.894736842 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14854448493 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527822731598 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689326502403 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114418836344 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091807216393 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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