Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money is important aspect of our lives. In present days we cannot exist without money, which is necessary to exchange goods between people. Some may thing that spending money right after earning them is better than saving it for the future. In my opinion, keeping money for the future is better option which I will explain in two reasons.
Firstly, people should keep money as a security deposit to use it in the future when hard times can come. Nobody knows the future which means that we need to be careful, because it not always may be good. Consequently, we should be secured for unexpected accidents. As an example, I remember when my neighbor, who works as Network Administrator, lived wealthy life. He was spending all money what he earned. His future seems to be bright and safe. However, corporation, in which he worked, has been compromised by hackers and he got fired because of this accident. Thus, he had no more money to live his wealthy life, and because of that, He lost his home. As we can see, saving money is important to use it when it is necessary.
Secondly, saved money, without doubt, may provide more funds to educate our children. Education is not cheap, a specially in United States. Therefore, parents need incredibly big amount of money to provide higher education for their kids. Universities may cost even fifty thousand dollars yearly and to gather this amount of cash, parents need to safe money as early as they can. Without saved money, their children can never get university education. For example, my friend Brian, who had very high grades in high school, wanted to go to university, but his parents, whom like to spend money easily, never thought to save money for his education. Consequently, when High School comes to end, He was forced to find some less paid job to get money for living and because of that, his dreams about Harvard degree disappeared quickly.
In conclusion, spending money is important to keep balance in our life, but we should not spend all earned money. Saving some cash to use it in bad time in the future and to help our children with education may make our life safely and less stressed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74535809019 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44401749381 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2939611578 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261425375503 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086195606349 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640728624948 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182108987511 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545225058665 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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