It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
knowledge asserts an ability of problem solving in the people. Some people believe that the knowledge on many academic subject is very helpful while other believe that specilizatio nin one field is best to have. As people becomes more confident and unflappable especially in that aspect when they master it, in my opinion, it ise better to specialize in one field as people can dig out a lot od success at that field and problem tackling skill in that field is absolute.
success can harvest only if it is understand in deep level with passion. deep understanding seeks out the every aspect of the related subject; it can unravel a thing which can be big important to the world. The desire and intensity of the person will be unidirectional, they barely think other than that. Enthusiastically and passionetly, people learn the aspect that facilitate most without much consideration of others. they keep on going for their knowledge.On doing so, there is huge chance to get a novel thing that can make them succesful. many people on the world either in the past or present has tasted the success dur to this strategy. For instance, we have learnt that well known secientist like Einstein who pursuasively follow the science being untenable to give up the hope what he wanted to get. Ultimately, he find the theory of relativity which makes him world biggest genius of all time. Thus, hard work and profound knowledge always keys for the success of human.
As little knowledge is always dangerous, incomplete can be also unreliable or counter productive as well in the situation. people with incomplete knowledge always struggle to make their impact where ever they go. they begin to trimble when they have to face real problem of the particular aspects. Rarely, people with this ability comes top out from thsi situation. incomplete details and their nervousnes hurt them a lot to be survivor of that situation. for instance, in my personbal experience, people with knowledge in the most aspects struggle a lot when they have to face big challenge which is key points of success. so, it is better to have aggod insight in one to be confident to solve the any related problem.
In conclsuion, indepth knowledge in the one field is very effective to be succesful and worthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70944988071 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532299741602 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4820188391 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18430246198 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514756156779 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621670288483 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119603652351 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576290013933 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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