it is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older
It is widely accepted that visiting different countries is enjoyable for all people in different ages. Some people may hold the view that it is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when we are older. Some other, nonetheless, take an opposite point and hold the view that older people it is not better for older people to travel abroad. Personally, I have a penchant toward the latter. In the next two paragraphs, I will aptly delve into my reasons and I will cogently substantiate this perspective.
The first aspect to point out is that younger people are more hopeful and they really want to experience new things. They actually like to travel and gain a lot of information about different cities. Sometimes they want to choose a city to spend rest of their life and they have to travel abroad for choosing the best country based on their own personality. The noteworthy statistics revealed by research conducted by the Amirkabir University of Tehran show that more than 60 percent of travelers to abroad are in the age between 20-30 so it is not just based on the trial and error methods.
Another noteworthy point which comes to my mind is indisputable fact that old people have not any enthusiastic to travel because they have lots of health problems so they need more help. It may sound a bit far-fetched at first but it is based on scientific evidence. Based on the results drawn from an exhaustive survey conducted by Tehran University, most of the people in older ages have health problems and they need more money to save for their health problems rather than spending that money for traveling.
To recapitulate, based on aforementioned argues, younger people can logically draw the conclusion that travelling to abroad can benefit them in many ways, from finding new places to spend rest of their life to visiting different people with different cultures, however, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there exist innumerable reasons and examples which champion my stance and are not mentioned above. If one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statements, one soon realizes that it is sufficient for younger people to travel abroad rather than older people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90616621984 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65639139987 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506702412869 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0282287266 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259989784694 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969595606015 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103484108684 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159986350862 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083913523662 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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