It has been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?? Why?? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is a widely supported hypothesis that the significance of movies in our culture, envisions and living styles has a prolonged influence. I consider movies or theater as a good source of learning, so I have a great endorsement for the announcement of building a new movie or theater near my location or neighborhood. My next sentences will explore the reasons why I support the movie or theater.
First and foremost, a closer look at the functions of movie theater shows that it depicts the premium shows of different films with different types of critics. A gathering of such people paves the way of thinking deeply considering the pros and cons of the content. Moreover, the rising kids, teenagers, youths will get facilities to watch some inspiring contents, as a result, they will get the scope of learning by watching these films. Also, the good environment of the cinema with some intellectual personalities will provoke these young generations to visualize the impact of the content on society.
Apart from the entertainment and learning process, the cinema will offer different types of jobs such as ticket master, hall monitor, security, sweeper, technical operator and to name a few. Moreover, some people outside the cinema hall will start tea-stall, food bakery, Coffee shop, etc. Therefore, the theater will influence the community by removing the unemployment issues.
Furthermore, there are some consequences of the theater may also harm to the society. For instance, the author of the theater can offer numerous bizarre shows or adult movies which is very much threating. Also, some groups of people may be addicted to the shows thus it may cause their economic loss. However, I think, public awareness and strict rules of government can ensure the good and inspiring films. Also, guardians should be careful about the children so that they don’t come to the theater frequently. In addition, the hall committee can take steps against these kinds of issues.
In essence, the aforesaid reasons conclude that a movie theater is a reliable and most efficient way of watching the exclusive and good qualities of movies. It can impart social learning, economic growth by creating employment. In spite of having some drawbacks which can be wiped out, I always in favor of building a movie theater at my neighborhood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13612565445 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81758099148 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0907399723 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.263157895 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162377957617 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525482620003 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609056155482 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097077080934 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847166401855 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.