It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There have been some moot points about a shopping center which construct near our neighborhood. The question of whether this issue has a positive or negative aspect of our life has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. When it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that it has a positive aspect of our life. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be expounded in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that nowadays due to the economic recession and inflation, there are very few jobs opportunities for jobless people. Thus, these kinds of construction are very beneficial for providing job positions. Needless to say, for every building projects, we need various skills and experts, therefore, many people can attend to these projects and find a job. As a case to the point, when I was graduated from university because I did not have any experience in that field. I could not find a career and this matter disappointed me very much. A big shopping center was constructing in our neighborhood. Hence, I went to that center and found an open position for supervising in that project which was a crucial record for me. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that new building in our neighborhood is very lucrative for us.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that owing to, low currency rates and sanctions in our country, the government asserts that one of the best ways for incoming is taxes. As a consequence, the shopping center provides more taxes for governments. My personal example demonstrates this reality, two days ago I read a newspaper. In that newspaper, the main article claims that a central bank in our country compensates its low budget by taking tax from hypermarkets. As a result, these places contain many stores. If each store gives its taxes it can help the government to increase its revenue. My personal example shed some light to the point that hypermarket in our neighborhood has many advantages for our country.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, everyone has his or her zeitgeist, I vehemently believe that large shopping centers have many positive aspects of our life. These building not only provide many job opportunities but also, help to compensate for we budged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
... which construct near our neighborhood. The question of whether this issue has a positive or negative a...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sult, these places contain many stores. If each store gives its taxes it can help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91251028397 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2314412316 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084138185324 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029930365252 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356799551541 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557245353943 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897958567537 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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