It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I live at the peripheral part of the city. The green spaces offer a tranquil and beautiful place. However, because my neighborhood is not very populated, there are not many public ventures. Therefore, if a plan for a new restaurant nearby were to be announced, I would definitely support it. I feel it would make the best place to stop-by to eat and to meet with people. I will explore these reasons in more detail in the following essay.
To begin with, I think that a new restaurant in the neighborhood would be a great idea because people could enjoy food outside their homes. To illustrate this better let me first familiarize you with my neighborhood. It consists of huge areas of green fields, and houses that are spread out. You have to drive to the closest restaurant, which is fifteen minutes away by car. Because of this reason, my neighbors and I choose to dine at our houses. Every day after work, I have to cook by myself, which I am not very good at. Sometimes, I get exhausted after work and cannot find the energy to make a meal. At such a case, others living in the city would order something from their homes, but food companies do not commute in the peripheral side, where I happen to live. Therefore, I believe that if there was a restaurant opened in my neighborhood, many people, including myself, would enjoy the advantages it would bring.
Moreover, a new restaurant makes the best place to meet with people and spend leisure time. As mentioned before, houses are distributed widely throughout the neighborhood and our professional obligations do not let me and my neighbors enjoy time together. I rarely see my friends, therefore, I imagine a new restaurant to be perfect for a meeting place. The neighborhood is large and, because of that I don’t personally know all of my neighbors. However, I am sure that the new restaurant would give me the chance to meet with new people and build valuable bonds. In other words, a new restaurant poses as an ideal location for creating friendships.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that everyone should embrace the idea of a new restaurant being opened. I feel that it would present a convenient facility for dining and meeting people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71649484536 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78139954724 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523195876289 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6611310785 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5652173913 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169374270182 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482590538226 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460222023613 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107175908585 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246099573026 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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