It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours

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It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.

class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align: none;text-autospace:none">Throughout the history, people class="have">have been looking to find an enjoy">enjoyable class="job">job in their life. In spite of the fact class="that">that class="some">some people believe jobs with class="five">five working days and class="short">short hours in a class="week">week are more enjoy">enjoyable, I firmly assert class="that">that working class="three">three days with longer hours in a class="week">week class="is">is the best way to enjoy. I feel this way for two reasons, class="which">which I will explore in the following essay.

The first and foremost class="reason">reason of the aforementioned class="notion">notion class="is">is class="that">that working class="three">three days a class="week">week provides a great opportunity for people to class="have">have more enjoy. In other words, in this condition, people class="who">who class="work">work just class="three">three days a class="week">week, class="have">have four days class="off">off in each of the weeks class="that">that class="can">can class="do">do everything class="that">that they class="want">want, class="which">which class="is">is more enjoy">enjoyable. class="my">my own experience class="is">is a compelling illustration of this class="notion">notion. class="when">when I was a teacher in an English institute last year, I worked there class="five">five days a class="week">week with class="short">short class="time">time. At class="that">that class="time">time, I was wondering to enroll class="piano">piano class, however, whenever I arrived at home I was extremely tired to class="do">do anything, so I prefered taking a rest for tomorrow. One day I talked to class="my">my manager to change class="my">my program to class="work">work for class="three">three days with long hours. She accepted class="my">my requiest, so after class="that">that I could enroll to class="piano">piano class in class="my">my class="off">off days class="which">which was really enjoy">enjoyable for me. Another noticeable class="reason">reason of the above state phenomenon, class="which">which should be mentioned here, class="is">is class="that">that saving money. To be more explain, people class="who">who class="work">work class="three">three days a class="week">week spend less money on their commute than people class="who">who class="work">work class="five">five days a class="week">week. What's more, they class="can">can save more money, and devote their extra money on enjoy">enjoyable subjects. For instacne, class="when">when I decided to talk to class="my">my manager based on the previous example, I talked to her on money class="which">which I spent on public transportation. after changing class="my">my program, I could save money class="which">which I had to spend on public transportation. As a consequence, the end of every month, I could go shopping, and buying whatever class="that">that I class="want">want class="which">which I enjoyed a lot.

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class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:10.0pt;line-height:115%;mso-layout-grid-align: none;text-autospace:none">Although class="some">some people believe class="that">that having a class="job">job where they class="work">work class="five">five days a weekwith class="short">short hours class="is">is more enjoy">enjoyable, in class="my">my point of view, people class="who">who class="have">have class="job">job where they class="work">work class="three">three days a class="week">week with long hours class="can">can enjoy their class="job">job more owing to they class="can">can attend in different classes to class="have">have fun, and they class="can">can save money to alocate enjoy">enjoyable things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so, i feel, in other words, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4661.0 1977.66487455 236% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 10.7396313364 4.8611393121 221% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.6274981891 2.67179642975 435% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453917050691 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1215.0 618.680645161 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.51630824373 185% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 214.452849576 48.9658058833 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.944444444 100.406767564 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076228748493 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457914955465 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379763495873 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430714774364 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453796754653 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 11.7677419355 350% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -54.4 58.1214874552 -94% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 10.1575268817 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 45.31 10.9000537634 416% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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