For each individual, it is crucial to have a friends. They are making our life more enjoyable and add a pleasant taste to it. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed bring us to the moot question whether it is better to keep the old friends rather than making new friends. The popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that it is a way better to make new friends than keep the old friends. There are two cogent reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, make a new friends make us get rid of a crestfallen memories. If we take a minute to ponder over it, people tend to connect events with places and which people were present while this occasion had happened, so people will recall the sad memories and will fell depress every time they meet the person that coincidence the event. For instance, when I was in high school, I had a car accident which made me lost my favorite dog. My friend, Sara was with me with her dog in this event. Fortunately, she and her dog did not hurt. Every time I met her, I recall that catastrophic occasion. Each time I could not hold my tears from falling. Eventually, I changed all the group of friends which we were meeting with to avoid see her. When I stopped see her, I did not remember the car accident a lot. Making new friends helped me to get around the sad feelings and make me felt better. As you can see, making new friends is better than keep the old friends.
Another salient point corroborating my stance is new friends will introduce me to a new Hobbies. A palpable example, as I mentioned in the previous example, when I joined a new group of friends. One of them, Adam, was a brilliant swimmer. He received a lot of medals and trophies in swimming champions. Every weekend all the group were going to cheer for him in the weekly race in the swimming club. I feel enthusiastic to try swimming. I asked Adam to training me to be a good swimmer. I started to practice with him each weekend after he finish his race. Eventually, after two months, I became a swimmer. Thanks to Adam inasmuch as he made me keened to try this adorable sport and became one of my favorite hobbies in my life. We conclude that make new friends better than keep the old friends.
To recapitulate, whether new friends will make us ride of the sad memories or new friends will make us have a new hobbies. Make new friends is better than keep old friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39072847682 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44315118545 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461368653422 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0299235764 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5862068966 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6206896552 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41379310345 5.45110844103 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400103288693 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1247555539 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18582933848 0.0737576698707 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32192897111 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127866391113 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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