Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“Travel is the only thing you will pay form and will make you richer". This statement is true. Traveling is full of merits to us. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed bring us to the moot question whether traveling outside country will be more beneficial than travel inside nation. The popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is traveling inside country will benefit people more. There are two cogent reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, traveling inside country will make people save their money. If we take a minute to ponder over it. When someone travel overseas, s/he have to book a flight as well as the different in the currency will cost them more money. In contrast, if anyone travel in his country, he does will travel to reachable places that do not need airplane to achieve it. A palpable example, last summer, I traveled to Chicago. The trip lasted for two weeks. It costs me the fees of the hotel, the food outlay and the admission fees of the recreation places. The summation for all the expenditures were 1200 dollars. However, in 2016, I traveled to Italy. the trip costed me much more money than Chicago's trip did. It costed me 2100 dollars, so I decided to travel frequently inside my country, which make me save a valuable amount of money. As you can see, people will benefit more from traveling inside their own country.
Another salient point corroborating my stance is people will save time when they travel inside the nation. Traveling to foreign country will take many days in just to reach the country. Nevertheless, inside country, when we decide to travel from place to place, it will take only hours to make it. For instance, as I mentioned in the previous paragraph, the trip to Chicago took only six hours to reach the city. I could use the same day of traveling to explore the city and this day was counted to the whole trip's time. The trip to Italy, on the other hand, took two days to reach Italy. I spent two days in the airplane and the transit country which is too much time and made feel exhausted and took more two days to rest from the trip, which made me loose two days that I supposed to spend it in entertainment places in Italy. We conclude that the trip inside the country is fruitful than the trip to foreign country.
To recapitulate, whether people will save their money, or they will save their time. People will obtain more benefits when they travel inside their country than traveling outside it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i suppose, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64955357143 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37087513544 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457589285714 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7753359087 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3928571429 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283103975132 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907497845079 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812186726924 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200172430888 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395941356466 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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