Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Now and in the past, having the gratify life is the goal that people want to achieve. Many factors are contributing to achieve that goal. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed bring us to the moot question whether the life today is more comfortable and easier than it was when my grandparents were children or not. The popular sentiment which I vehemently cling is the life today is easier than the life when my grandparents were children. There are two cogent reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, the technological advances that we have today made our life luxurious. If we take a minute to ponder over it. The invention of the internet which has many implications in our life have an tremendous effect in making our life simple. If we imagine our self without any of the facilities that introduced by the internet, we will knew how the life of our grandparents was difficult since the internet was not invented yet in their childhood period. A palpable example, I am student in Kentucky University College of Pharmacy. I rely on the online resources which I can obtain from many websites such as PubMed to find the reliable information I need for my assignments. By surfing the online websites I can find even specific information by just writing one word and by one click, presto!! I have the information I want. The internet make it more easier for me to study as well as save my time instead of wasting many hours looking in one book and then do not find what I want. I could knew how our study is difficult if the internet had not invented. As you can see, our life today is easier than the time when my grandparents were children.
Another salient point corroborating my stance is that the improvement of the transportation routes me our life, today, more comfortable. In contrast to the past time, the rout of transportation were limited which make them had difficulty in ding their basic needs. For instance, in the time when my grandfather was a child, the only available rout of transportation was the trains and limited numbers of cars which were not affordable for the most people. When they wanted to purchase a goods from the city which was located 100 miles away from the town where my grandfather was living in, he had to go to the train station, which was located 15 miles away from their town, by the cart pulled by horses which was moving very slow and take a long time to make them reach the train station. My grandfather family were spending whole the way in order to travel to a city, which today, we can approach it in few horses inasmuch as the availability of the vehicles and other transportation mean which make our life easier. We conclude that today the life is easier than my grandparent’s life.
To recapitulate, whether the technological advances which make our life luxurious or the improvement of the routes of transportation. Our life today is more comfortable than the time when my grandparents were children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81341507403 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454716981132 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.218010009 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.304347826 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0434782609 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252061583389 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931243531133 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103587298665 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200706893756 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663047111741 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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