Friendship is one of the most vital options in our lives, and when it comes to keeping the old versus making new friends, two controversial opinions will be stated. As far as I am concerned, Attaining more friends is a vital matter in all people's lives which means it had better keep our old friends while trying to make new companions. The essay will illustrate why and how.
First, old friends are the individuals who have known us in a long time; hence, they are familiar with our personality or character even more than our family in some aspects. That is why their companionships offer us myriads benefits; in positive and negative life situations. Taken one oy experiences as an example, once I got sick and needed to be bedridden in hospital, my father had a severe physical disability at the time, and I could not request him to take care of me. One of my old friends had been informed about my disease and helped me out as much as possible; even he helped me pay the surgery expenses. On the other hand, many new friends who were my classmates and heard the trouble did not commit themselves to help me, of course, one of them only called to let me know about an exam date! Ergo, it is vital to keep our old friends whom we know, trust, and have commitments toward our friendship.
Secondly, time changes everything, and our circumstances are not the exception. We leave our previous habitant; city, country, and even our continent, as we grow up; hence, being taken away from our old friends is inevitable with passing the time. In every stage of life, we enter a new situation and get a new position; therefore, making new companions is supposed to be significantly normal, while contacting old friends from time to time. However, our requirements urge us to be with our new comrades. For instance, when I entered university in a foreign country, I had to travel abroad to pursue my academic goals, still became away from my family and old friends. I had many troubles in the new country as an international student; I started making new native friends to improve my second language and get accustomed to the new culture, which was strange for me initially. Moreover, I needed new comrades who can be substitutes for my old friend in diverse circumstances. It was intolerable to study and live there without friends' support.
In conclusion, friends are friends, and their advantages are inexplicable in a cursory glance. Accordingly, we can not overlook their benefits; consequently, we had better try to search for new ones while keeping the old ones. Friends are what they are, and we are continually required to expand our friends' circle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74514038877 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79409025788 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533477321814 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8022043731 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.631578947 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354497749574 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119232542218 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930067621445 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248800352438 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469055134289 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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