It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
In the modern era, reading or watching the news plays a crucial role in peoples' daily life. Accordingly, people can receive abundant information by reading or watching the news, and thereby, increasing their knowledge. Much breath and ink are extended in arguing about reading or watching the news that showed by people who have similar opinions with us or following news from the people who have different ideas. When it comes to me, I agree with the idea that it had better track news from the people who have a diverge view from us instead of reading or watching from people who have an alike ideas with us. My points of view are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, receiving information from people who have different opinions helps people to expand their knowledge. In other words, this idea helps people to learn new issues which are different from their knowledge. by the following news from people who have similar ideas to us, we think that our information and data are intact and complete, so we do not have enough avid to receive and learn new information. For example, most of the successful politician try to follow their critic's viewpoints to detect their flaws and faults, and thereby, defeated their competitors in the following elections. In fact, in this way, they detect their mistakes and try to correct them to attract more people and also improve their knowledge about the community.
Another reason which is worthwhile to be mentioned is that, by reading news presented by people who have different interests with us, people can be successful in their social life. That is to say, in every work and career place there are different types of viewpoints and ideas, and some of them are invaluable ones, so by following various opinions people can improve their communication with others. For example, there are different religious, racial, ethnic, and political viewpoints in every society, and living in this community requires paying attention to all of this viewpoint. Similarly, by respecting different opinions, people also recing similar attention from others, and thereby, they experience higher self-esteem. The more people regarding different ideas, the more they are prosperous in social interaction. consequently, every brilliant community composes of different interests and ideas and also the people who admire their views and swallow their pride.
in the summary of what has been discussed above, based on the foregoing reasons, it had better follow news from people who have different viewpoints instead of following it from people who are similar to us in terms of opinions. not only is it important for people to enhance their knowledge and information, but it helps them to have successful communication with each other in their social life. it is strongly suggested that governments and mass media producers pay attention to this point in their plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, similarly, so, while, as to, for example, in fact, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2444.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13445378151 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67455045037 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426470588235 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2524087866 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.631578947 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0526315789 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236177422504 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940722668496 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678419697867 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166392584594 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877907178889 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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