It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
In the progressive and sophisticated today's world, people are overwhelmed and inundated with diverse assortments of daily news. In this circumstance, people definitely will encounter the news that are good agreements with their points of view as long as the news that is different from their opinions and ideas. In this line of thought, some people believe it is better for them to follow the news closely to their viewpoints. Others, however, prefer to know about opposite views. I, for one, concur with the latter group for two conspicuous reasons that I will elaborate upon hereunder.
The first exquisite reason that comes to mind is that people need to know about opposite and different views to deal with some potential people who only track the news which is closed to their views, gradually will be narrow-minded because they do not have any other information. To elucidate on, knowing about other's ideas and thoughts, people can broaden their horizons and make new perspective. To put in another word, in our ever-changing world, people need to enhance their knowledge to be productive and reflective. For example, until a couple of years ago, I thought herbal medicine was a piece of junk. I totally denied its effectiveness, and I do not care about the news about its merits. However, when I accidentally read a piece of news about the effect of a kind of herbal remedy on cancer published by Harvard University, I changed my mind and after that followed the news about such cures.
Second, it goes without saying that in the modern era all events and happenings in a country profoundly affect the life of the whole society. To be more specific, people who only watch the news that they like, miss any important information that may influence their life situation. Although in many cases it is not favorable to watch the news distinct from our thoughts, watching them, we can take advantage of the potential opportunities that have been existed. To make it more vivid, there is a TV channel in my country that broadcasts the news totally different from my opinions. However, watching the news on this channel, I gain a better understanding of the financial problems of my country and could invest my money in a profitable way. Although this channel is a proponent of some politics that I do not admire, I can take advantage of its prediction about economic and make more money.
In conclusion, having the two mentioned reasons into account, I do believe that people should follow all of the news, no matter they are closed to their viewpoints or not. In this way, not only can they broaden their mind and stay open-minded, but they also can take advantage of every potential chance and benefit from that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ifferent from their opinions and ideas. In this line of thought, some people belie...
Line 3, column 905, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...hat followed the news about such cures. Second, it goes without saying that in t...
Line 5, column 724, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a profitable way" with adverb for "profitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...of my country and could invest my money in a profitable way. Although this channel is a proponent o...
Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... I do believe that people should follow all of the news, no matter they are closed to thei...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87284482759 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71416136785 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497844827586 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6746220999 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4210526316 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191403739511 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610767807975 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530514220984 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115197701622 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448091476331 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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