Is it more important for students to learn ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts
People are the corner stone of every successful society; indeed, the more individuals of a country are qualified, the more the country is powerful. In this regard, education plays a pivotal role in preparing human beings for the future. Therefore, it is crystal clear that why all of the governments try to enhance the level of education in theirs community, which assists them in bringing about wealthy communities. With this in mind, some think that it stands to reasons that it is better for students to learn ideas and concepts rather than learning facts, while others hold the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the first attitude carries more weight for many reasons, three of the most substantial of which are discussed below.
The most compelling reason is that it is true that facts in the books do not cover all subjects. Even though they are crucial in taking exams and getting high scores in schools and universities, a person can rarely implement those facts out of school and in the work. On the other hand, people can reach the benefits of learning main ideas and concepts of issues so that they can apply them in the different circumstances--or, to put it in another way, understanding the main idea of subjects gives individuals an opportunity to encounter with unpredicted occasions simultaneously. As a point in view, when I was a business students in university, in Isfahan, we had free-discussion classes in which we was learning how to solve simulated business classes. Teachers was letting different students express various ideas, then they were explaining the positive and negative aspect of each idea. By this method, students learnt how utilize their knowledge in the real life which was much better than offering one solution in order to solve specific example.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that education is not hast to with how many facts you one has memorized. Rather, it is a way by which one can improve his or her thinking ability. There are a great deal of issues regarding politic, history, art, to name but a few. What is important about them is the lessons behind them rather than their statistics. Understanding concepts and ideas develops students' critical thinking ability. For instance, we have heard a lot about Mohandas Gandhi . It is not important for us to learn and memorize facts such as his birth date or the length of time that he had spent in the prisons. What is essential is his idea that he did his best so as to achieve it. As a result, learning concepts and idea helps man kind to learn.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned ingredients discussed above, I do believe that the merits of learning facts and concepts are more than those of learning facts on the grounds that it gives one a chance not only to learn them how to deal with unexpected situation , but also develop their thinking ability.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as a result', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216457960644 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.166368515206 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894454382826 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04114490161 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0644007155635 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143112701252 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0447227191413 0.0351676179071 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78259444893 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268336314848 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.093023255814 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00715563506261 0.0209618222197 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0268336314848 0.0139019557991 193% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2972.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 511.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81604696673 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324853228963 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256360078278 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195694716243 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101761252446 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78259444893 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510763209393 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.9534687217 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.55 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0866665982 48.84282405 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.6 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.55 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 51.1860078278 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.48684210526 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348709623278 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0817992625221 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0657681343041 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465549465598 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185961483909 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138539438425 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105044871958 0.0781384742642 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.428058347516 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496121543748 0.067059652881 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270171997211 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965706903023 0.0618886996521 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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