It's better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time
Galloping advances in modern society have made the majority people under great pressure. At times, people have to deal with several projects related to their works, and some of them always feel exhausted by the workloads. They may get disoriented in the huge sea of the works and cannot concentrate their attention on any one of the jobs. Hence, I suggest that, people should deal with one project at one time.
For one thing, it will help them promote the work efficiency. As we all know, that abilities of human beings are limited and various from different people. Our minds can be disturbed by many things happening at the same time. Not only may we decrease the work effiency, but also can we confuse some project with another, which could cause a unfavorable consequence. A telling example is what I have undergone in my college. Once I was asked to do a presentation about my final exam by my automation theory teacher. At mean time, I was preparing another one by my mentor which was given to me long time ago. Bacause I just forgot the mentor's task, I had to complete two projects in a week. Finally, neither of these presentaion was good. If I had done it early and just focus on one task, I believe I can do better.
Moreover, complete one task at one time can create more profit via the increasing efficiency. Because all the power, energy, and resources are used in one project, people can make valuable use of these condition and fulfill a relatively best results. Once a company, which aims at online store, sells mainly the clothes to young people. After its rapid expansion, the company decides to sell more commodities to raise profits, it begin to sell books, CDs, foods and etc. Contrary to its expectation, its profits declined because sustaining other resources cost too much. Then a excellent manager decides cut down all parts but the clothes, focus on the style and the quailty. Consequently, more young peopble come to their websit to by clothes and the company begin to take the first place of the market.
Admittedly, sometimes we have to solve many project at the same time, however, I suppose that the majority of these situation happen due to our unreasonable schedule. If we could set a favorable plan, follow the rules, persist our arrangment, and face one problem at a time, we can handle the mission impossible.
Based on the discussoin above, I strongly advice that we should start just one project then after finishing the task, begin another one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...best results. Once a company, which aims at online store, sells mainly the clothe...
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...l more commodities to raise profits, it begin to sell books, CDs, foods and etc. Cont...
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...however, I suppose that the majority of these situation happen due to our unreasonable schedule...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'i suppose', 'for one thing']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20325203252 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.160569105691 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752032520325 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467479674797 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0772357723577 0.0685040099705 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103658536585 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0406504065041 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5562429495 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030487804878 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0020325203252 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0934959349593 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284552845528 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00813008130081 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2494.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 433.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75981524249 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321016166282 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247113163972 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152424942263 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0993071593533 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5562429495 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568129330254 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 68.1715287945 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0416666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1649125169 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 42.7529830639 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.22142857143 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455391946232 0.300154397459 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0879863042194 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0725973916157 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441853031485 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192924699304 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131211866369 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710029821715 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279379113799 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0402175539919 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266062451474 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450632368504 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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